Akimichi Competition

[the Admin of the Boards]

Contest: Write a story for a new Akimichi character.

Prize: Winner recieves their Akimichi Char.

Deadline: Friday 17th

All entries will recieve tokens

[Neji]

//Whoo first entry ^.^

Ever since he was a toddler Akihiko Akimichi always felt out of place, even in his home he always felt he was different from his brothers. He could never put his finger on the “why” though, until the day they began their training in clan jutsu. He suddenly realized... he was skinny! And he couldn’t even perform the most basic of his clan’s jutsus, Baika no Jutsu. He felt disheartened and left out. He always knew his brothers ate more than him and looked a little different, but he never knew just how different they really were.

“Dad?” He asked one day. “Why am I so different from you all?” His Father sighed knowing one day he would have to have this talk with his son. “Well Son It’s your metabolism… It’s just too high to be honest. For us it’s almost unnatural!” Akihiko was baffled “Metablism? What’s that?” His Father nodded sagely before replying. “Well Son your body just processes food too quickly; it doesn’t let you build up any bulk. You would have to eat three times as much as you already do to gain weight like your brothers. But, don’t worry Mom and I will always love you very much, no matter what you look like!”

And, so he did he ate any food he could get his hands on, like his very life depended on it, but still he stayed skinny. The only thing he gained as the years passed was a fine, and in his opinion horrifyingly toned and lean layer of muscle. Even in the academy He believed himself ostracized by his peers, for being such a weird looking Akimichi, though this was entirely in his own head. He was an introvert through every year of schooling, because of his own bad self image. But, he kept trying his hardest wanting one thing and one thing only: to grow big and strong one day like his dad, and prove to the whole clan he wasn’t just some black sheep!

//Akihiko’s “condition” renders him unable to perform Baika no jutsu or Nikudan Sensha which relys on the Baika no jutsu all other clan techniques are feasible though.

[Dm Anko]

Extened to tuesday the 20'th

[gloomwater]

YAY for extendation

ok, here goes:


'Kanju Akimichi was always the, 'baka' of the family, he had conserderable bulk, and not just the usual fat, but layers of thick muscle under it. He was always training, and always trying to keep up with his rival in the Hyuuga Clan, but he always lost spar's and battles, no matter how hard he tried, how hard he trained, he could not beat the Hyuuga.'

'He was so disapointed, that he left the village to go on a training trip for a time, he left the village, and began training as hard as he could, learnign from ninja of all sorts of villages, retired ninja, and all, and since he was never the brightest Akimichi, which is why he had his title, he one day met a sound ninja and asked for training.'

'The sound nin accepted, but he couldnt help but smirk, he would be able to kill an Akimichi, and make leaf think he was training him! a priceless oportunity. He began working the Akimichi, enjoying watchign him try and do impossible tasks, or so he thought, then the impossoble, was suddenly impossible, as the Akimichi did ALL the tasks, 1000 pushups, liftinf boulders, the list went on and on, and he continued.'

'Finnaly, the soud ninja was angry, he yelled in rage and said, "screw it!, i';ll jsut kill you!!" the sound ninja charged and the stunned Akimichi took two kunai before his slow mind figured out what was happening, and he cursed and enlarged his Fist, he may have been an baka, but he hit like a steel tank, the fist slammed into the sound nins chest, and the ribs shattered form the impact, killing him instantly.'

'Kanju stared in horror, and ran back to leaf as fast as he could, of course, not being the best runner, it took him several days to do so. The Akimichi finnalywas home, his cloths slightly rag-tag, but he was much stronger now, and though he was no match for a hyuuga, and his mind was still slow, he was much smarter then he had been.'

'The nest day Kaju came to the clan's house to be greated warmly by his family, and happily was fed a feast of welcome, and the next day, hsi hard training continued, now learnign form books, as well as hardwork.'

----------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Name: Kanju Akimichi

Personality: Good-Natured, Slightly Slow, Hard Worker

Hair Color: Dark Brown

Hair Style: Short/Spiked

Skin Tone: Light Tan

Other: Because of his slow mind, he takes -1 to learnign Jutsu's, and -10 to all Lore rolls.

[xania]

Some people are born great, others have greatness thrust upon them, and there are those who are yet destined for greatness. Genjo Akimichi is none of these things, rather, he spits in the face of greatness by refusing the gifts that descend from his blood. Genjo is an absolute coward. He would much rather throw out a genjutsu than his fist, and run away like a little child. Admittedly, he's no older then 16, but come on. He's even into Dieting! He's heard all that propaganda about 'health food', and laps it all up, more so than the food itself! He exercises as much as he can, unable to accept the fact that people can't change their bone structure.
He finds the Human Boulder technique particularly distasteful, after all, who in their right minds would be cruel enough to crush an enemy in fat? He has no qualms about body expansion, but he would never trust it in lieu of genjutsu. On missions, he never wants to travel alone. He'd much rather have someone right behind him, because when he tries to turn too quickly, he falls on his back and can't get up. Poor Genjo has to suffer through this 'turtle syndrome' while his life is in danger, which partially explains why he doesn't trust himself with taijutsu.

.................................................................................................

Every time he makes a dex roll (excluding initiative) or uses taijutsu make a 1d10 roll. On a 1, 'Turtleness' kicks in and he ends up on the ground for a turn.

[Dm Anko]

-----------------CLOSED AT THIS POINT----------------------

[Dm Anko]

xania is the winner.

The other two will receive 3 tokens each, from me.

[Dale The Chef]

Err I got them covered allready.

[Dm Anko]

k