roseysweetbabygirl
Chuunin
I would put something meaningful, but, I'm just drawing a blank.
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A Poem
Jul 23, 2010 22:43:45 GMT -5
Post by roseysweetbabygirl on Jul 23, 2010 22:43:45 GMT -5
The sky, Void of stars The bass pumping through my skin The feeling of weightlessness Suspended in the water I float I miss the hands I never felt the warmth I so desire What if you see me. Would you hate the sight? What if you hear me? and hate what you hear? What if you held me? and couldn't feel my warmth? I climb out, Skin dripping my heart aches, I watch the ground Little bugs fly around my face I enter the stall, and shut it tight as I change a pounding at first I think my heart pounds for you as I open the door Tight hands grope up my body the smell of rancid breath creeping up my neck. I push and kick, I scream so loud and finally I escape hiding in the crowds, I pray. When you see me. I know you'll like it. When you hear me. You'll smile with pleasure. When you hold me. I know you will feel my heart. I know you'll always love me.
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roseysweetbabygirl
Chuunin
I would put something meaningful, but, I'm just drawing a blank.
Posts: 205
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A Poem
Jul 23, 2010 22:45:36 GMT -5
Post by roseysweetbabygirl on Jul 23, 2010 22:45:36 GMT -5
okay this happened to me a while ago. I was at a pool party, when I went into the stall to change, I got an unexpected suprise, and I had to vent out my frustrastions. so no, I don't care if you don't like it. it's not that you may or may not like it. I just needed to write something down.
:3 thankyou.
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Jul 23, 2010 23:39:07 GMT -5
Post by Joshie/Neji on Jul 23, 2010 23:39:07 GMT -5
Beautiful hun <3
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roseysweetbabygirl
Chuunin
I would put something meaningful, but, I'm just drawing a blank.
Posts: 205
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A Poem
Jul 24, 2010 0:34:55 GMT -5
Post by roseysweetbabygirl on Jul 24, 2010 0:34:55 GMT -5
thanks :3
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Kimimaro
Genin
Everything happens to everybody sooner or later if there is time enough.
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Jul 24, 2010 5:13:21 GMT -5
Post by Kimimaro on Jul 24, 2010 5:13:21 GMT -5
While I take your encounter wasn't a pleasant one, I felt and saw the meaning to the poem.
For what it's worth, I enjoyed reading it.
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roseysweetbabygirl
Chuunin
I would put something meaningful, but, I'm just drawing a blank.
Posts: 205
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A Poem
Jul 24, 2010 14:22:07 GMT -5
Post by roseysweetbabygirl on Jul 24, 2010 14:22:07 GMT -5
thanks, and no not one of the most pleasant encounters.
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A Poem
Jul 24, 2010 18:49:43 GMT -5
Post by Rose/Kiba\ PawZ on Jul 24, 2010 18:49:43 GMT -5
Well Writen ^.^ as for the topic im glad your venting.
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roseysweetbabygirl
Chuunin
I would put something meaningful, but, I'm just drawing a blank.
Posts: 205
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A Poem
Jul 25, 2010 0:55:53 GMT -5
Post by roseysweetbabygirl on Jul 25, 2010 0:55:53 GMT -5
:3 thaaaankyou!
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Jul 25, 2010 13:32:37 GMT -5
Post by Gaara on Jul 25, 2010 13:32:37 GMT -5
I feel bad saying that it was a great poem but it was Rosey. ;D
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roseysweetbabygirl
Chuunin
I would put something meaningful, but, I'm just drawing a blank.
Posts: 205
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A Poem
Jul 25, 2010 20:34:16 GMT -5
Post by roseysweetbabygirl on Jul 25, 2010 20:34:16 GMT -5
nah, thanks buddy! it doesn't bother me that it's good, at all :3
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Jul 26, 2010 17:58:31 GMT -5
Post by Gaara on Jul 26, 2010 17:58:31 GMT -5
Well, it is defianately a good way to let out your feelings, better then punching holes in walls or something.
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roseysweetbabygirl
Chuunin
I would put something meaningful, but, I'm just drawing a blank.
Posts: 205
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A Poem
Jul 27, 2010 15:04:03 GMT -5
Post by roseysweetbabygirl on Jul 27, 2010 15:04:03 GMT -5
yea...or I read with my feet in the pond outside our house for a day >.> what I did yesterday, and somewhat today after I got back from the dentist. No cavities, and they are making an apointment to pull my wisom teeth T3T neeh.
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Jul 27, 2010 18:03:04 GMT -5
Post by Gaara on Jul 27, 2010 18:03:04 GMT -5
Wait...you read with your feet? Is that a way you vent your anger, or are you just throwing that in there? *is confused*
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roseysweetbabygirl
Chuunin
I would put something meaningful, but, I'm just drawing a blank.
Posts: 205
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A Poem
Aug 12, 2010 23:40:26 GMT -5
Post by roseysweetbabygirl on Aug 12, 2010 23:40:26 GMT -5
lol no! I sat at the pond's edge, and stuck my feet in the water >.>
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