Post by Gaara on Mar 20, 2010 17:33:41 GMT -5
Shinugakure's Rise
Written by: Jake Abela (Me)
Idea's by: Thomas Stachowski, Jake Abela, Andreus Gobis, and Johnathan Morris.
Inspired by the series written by Masashi Kishimoto.
Chapter One: A Shinobi's Request
A week after beginning the building of Shinugakure, the small Hidden Village is nearly complete as the Five Shinobi converse on a dark night.
Mareo: "Dudes, I am so bored. Lets go and kill someone or something! I thought being Missing Shinobi would be fun, not lame!"
Kenji: "Mareo, shush."
Mareo: "You know what? I won't shush, ok! You can shush! Jiro and I are going to go and fight some weak chunnin and steal all there stuff! Right Jiro?"
Jiro looks slightly at his father Nakatoro. Nakatoro glares at him with slight disapproval but doesn't notice it.
Jiro: "Yeah! Lets go! I am tired of Lee staring at me like I am lame!"
Kenji's piercing eyes glare into Jiro's and Mareo's eyes with anger.
Kenji: "Is this your final decision Mareo? And is it yours Jiro?"
Both Jiro and Mareo nod heading for the exit to the house they are in, hidden in the trees of the Forest of Death.
Kenji: "Alight, your decisions." Kenji pulls two scrolls from a pouch on the side of his pocket. He handsigns and then appear two puppets, Jiro and Mareo. The puppets seem to be exact versions of Mareo and Jiro. "Are you sure?"
Jiro and Mareo: "Yes!" They sprint out the door not noticeing the puppets summoned by Kenji.
Nakatoro then whispers to Kenji: "Do it, we knew the time would come, kill them both. I am aware that Jiro is my son and our genjutsu master, but their times have come." Kenji then nods to this.
Kenji moves his fingers slightly and the two puppets fly in the direction of Jiro and Mareo. The two puppets, Jiro (puppet form) grapples Mareo, and Mareo (puppet form) grapples Jiro. On both Jiro and Mareo (puppets) a long sharp blade shoots from both of their stomachs and, as the puppets are bear-hugging the real Jiro and Mareo, the blades pierce through them and they drop to the ground. Looking closer at those blades you would also be able to tell that they were covered in a poison, this poison is a speciality of Kenji's that has no known antidote. Jiro and Mareo (the puppets) are then pulled back in by Kenji and unsummoned as the real Jiro and Mareo are left to die outside the house. Lucky, Lee was asleep so a story will be made up on how they died and their bodies will be disposed of before the next day.
The next morn...
Lee wakes up and looks around the room.
Lee: "Hey Kenji, good morning. You know where Jiro and Mareo are?"
Kenji: "Them? Last night they went out to go and kill some Leaf Shinobi, turns out they died."
Lee: "Thank God, I hated them so much. Anyways," Lee looks over a Nakatoro who is sitting a table reading some files. "What are we going to be doing today, we are pretty much done with the HQ so I want to go on a mission or something."
Nakatoro looks up and begins to speak. "I have a mission planned for today, do not worry."
Kenji: "Well, what is it hmm?"
Nakatoro pulls out a scroll and tosses it at Kenji. "There it is, happy? I stole it from the Hokage's office last night, it is S-Ranked."
Kenji opens up the scroll and reads it aloud. "Konohagakure, this is a dire emergency! We are here camping out in the Land of Rice and we are afraid we may be attacked by the Jounin on guard outside of Otogakure. We are two chunnin from Rain Village that need assistence in defeating the Jounin because we are injured and low on supplies. We also request that you help the two of us escort the civilian that we rescued. Signed, Kyoki and Lonin of the Village Hidden in Rain. That is what it says, so are we going to help them?"
Nakatoro looks at Kenji with a look. "Somewhat, we are going to help them, take the reward, then kill them and take the rest of their ryo. With this mission executed successfully we should have enough ryo to finish Shinugakure."
Lee: "Alright, so are you comnig to Nakatoro-Sensai?"
Nakatoro shakes his head. "No, no I am not."
Kenji: "Don't worry Lee, this should be simple enough. Lets pack up and get going."
To prepare Kenji loads fifteen puppet scrolls into his pouch, 2 smoke bombs, three explosive tags, an antidote, 10 kunai, 5 shuriken, and 6 poison bombs. On the other hand, when Lee prepares he grabs a Demonblade (greatsword) and sticks it on his back along with 6 first-aid kits, 20 shurikens, and 12 explosive tags.
Lee: "Lets get going then."
As they head out of the Forest of Death they make there way to the Outskirts of the Hidden Leaf Village, two Leaf Shinobi are seen hanging out near the southern part of the Outskirts sparring.
Kenji: "Are you prepared to take these guys out Lee, you are going to be doing it yourself?"
Lee: "Yeah, this should be fun." Lee then runs over towards the two sparring shinobi at a lightning fast speed and pulls out his Demonblade. He runs up to the first one who looks weakend and slices at his skull. The genin, not having time to react, gets his skull chopped in two. The other man, being a chunnin of lower status flips around and looks at Lee.
Chunnin Guy: "What the heck is your problem???"
Lee just looks at him then sprints and yells out the name of the jutsu he uses. "Eight Trigrams: Sixty-Four Palms!" He runs at the chunnin and like a blur hits him and knocks him out. He then takes the Demonblade and cuts his head off laughing. "Kenji, we're good to go."
So the two missing shinobi, Lee and Kenji continued onward to the Land of Rice. After about an hour of extremely fast travel they arrive in Rice Country.
Lee: "So where are they exactly?"
Kenji points in the direction of three people hiding in a shelter of rocks. "That is them."
Lee and Kenji run in their direction and begin to act like friends.
Lee: "Hello, we are ANBU from Konohagakure, you requested assistence back to Rain Village?"
Rain Chunnin One: "Yes, yes, thank you!!!"
Rain Chunnin Two: "Hello, I am Firo and this is my pal Rikon. This is a civilian we rescued named Akatiro. If you could please defeat those three Sound Jounin over there it would be quite helpful."
Akatiro: "Yes, then escort us all back to Rain."
Kenji: "Alright, let us then Lee." Lee and Kenji searched throughout the area and found the three Oto Shinobi.
Sound Jounin Leader: "Hey! Look over there guys! More Leaf scum for us to eat!!" The leader of this group is nearly 8 feet tall and has huge muscles.
Sound Jounin One: "Lets eat 'em boss man!" The first of the two group members is a slim man with two steel arm and a knife for each of his hands.
Sound Jounin Two: "I call the man in white!" The second of the two group members has a deformed face and a sharingan eye.
Lee pulls out the Demonblade and stares at the Sound Jounin who called him out. "Prepare to die!!!" He throws the Demonblade at him then flickers so he is once again holding the blade. As he grasps it he jumps into the air and slices the mans neck in two. "How do you like me now???" He looks at the Jounin as he drops dead.
Kenji: "Save one for me why don't cha Lee?"
Lee sighs while looking at Kenji "I will try Kenji."
Kenji then pulls out the puppet scrolls and summons Jiro and Mareo. "Hey, it is the puppets I made for our dead friends!"
Lee, while looking confusedly at Kenji, watchs the other striking Sound Jounin from the corner of his eye and slices his head off as well, laughing. "And then, there was one."
Kenji: "He is mine, why don't you go back to the three guys eh Lee?"
Lee: "Sure, why not?"
As Lee heads back to the two shinobi and the civilian, Kenji slightly moves his fingers signalling his puppets, Jiro and Mareo, to strike at the Leader.
Sound Jounin Leader: "Don't expect to hit me!!!" The Sound Jounin trys to flicker out of the way but he doesn't realize that the real Kenji is already waiting in the spot he knows that would be open. Kenji waits with a kunai in hand and as the Leader flickers to the position Kenji throws the kunai into the air then it falls and lands on the leaders head as he was not paying much attention. The leader then begins to bleed ffrom the head but doesn't die.
Sound Jounin Leader: "God!!! What was that for?" The leader then pulls out a long katana and runs quickly at Kenji prepared to strike. "Die boy!!"
Kenji: "Why don't you meet my friend Jiro eh?"
A claw covered in poison then ejects from Jiro's hand and he flys over in the direction of the Sound Jounin and claws him in the head, decapitating him. Kenji laughs, unsummons his puppets, then returns to the four others.
Kenji: "That was much too simple eh Lee?"
Lee: "Yeah, pretty easy my pal!" He highfives Kenji but then get back to business."
Firo: "Thanks, now we should get back to Rain before more come to kill us eh Rikon?"
Rikon: "Yeah, lets go."
So the five people head back towards Rain slowly running because they are with a civilian. After a few hours of travel at a normal running pace they get to Rain.
Lee: "So, you have a reward for us?"
Firo: "Yes, yes, of course." Firo reachs into his pocket and pulls out 200 ryo handing it to Lee. Rikon then reachs into his pocket as well and pulls out 500 ryo handing it to Lee as well. "There is your pay, now leave us."
Kenji: "Now, let us Lee."
Lee: "Of course my friend."
Lee pulls out his Demonblade and Kenji throws an explosive tag onto the edge of it. Lee swings it at the three of them then Kenji handsigns on impact for it to explode. Within a simple movement the three people are taken out dead and the two Missing Shinobi laugh.
Lee: "Ahh...the good ol' days."
Kenji: "Take their money and let's get out of here before we get caught and have to fight even more."
So the two Missing Shinobi headed back to Shinugakure with pockets full of ryo, 3000 ryo to be exact. After two hours they arrive back in Shinugakure. Nakatoro sits there waiting for them.
Nakatoro: "Took you both long enough. Where's my money men?"
Lee reachs into his pouch and pulls out the 3000 ryo handing it to Nakatoro.
Lee: "There you go boss, leave us be." Lee then walks to his bed and crashes for the night.
Kenji: "Agh.. I think he may have to go soon as well."
Nakatoro: "Why?"
Lee: "He is stealing all my kills." He sorta glares at Nakatoro sarcastically.
Nakatoro laughs. "Yes, very funny Kenji, now go get some rest. We have a long day ahead of us tomorrow, and by 'we' I mean you two. So go get some rest why don't cha?"
Kenji nods and heads off towards his bed. The group now having only three members left. There HQ nearly complete. The legend of Shinugakure will soon no longer be a myth.
Written by: Jake Abela (Me)
Idea's by: Thomas Stachowski, Jake Abela, Andreus Gobis, and Johnathan Morris.
Inspired by the series written by Masashi Kishimoto.
Chapter One: A Shinobi's Request
A week after beginning the building of Shinugakure, the small Hidden Village is nearly complete as the Five Shinobi converse on a dark night.
Mareo: "Dudes, I am so bored. Lets go and kill someone or something! I thought being Missing Shinobi would be fun, not lame!"
Kenji: "Mareo, shush."
Mareo: "You know what? I won't shush, ok! You can shush! Jiro and I are going to go and fight some weak chunnin and steal all there stuff! Right Jiro?"
Jiro looks slightly at his father Nakatoro. Nakatoro glares at him with slight disapproval but doesn't notice it.
Jiro: "Yeah! Lets go! I am tired of Lee staring at me like I am lame!"
Kenji's piercing eyes glare into Jiro's and Mareo's eyes with anger.
Kenji: "Is this your final decision Mareo? And is it yours Jiro?"
Both Jiro and Mareo nod heading for the exit to the house they are in, hidden in the trees of the Forest of Death.
Kenji: "Alight, your decisions." Kenji pulls two scrolls from a pouch on the side of his pocket. He handsigns and then appear two puppets, Jiro and Mareo. The puppets seem to be exact versions of Mareo and Jiro. "Are you sure?"
Jiro and Mareo: "Yes!" They sprint out the door not noticeing the puppets summoned by Kenji.
Nakatoro then whispers to Kenji: "Do it, we knew the time would come, kill them both. I am aware that Jiro is my son and our genjutsu master, but their times have come." Kenji then nods to this.
Kenji moves his fingers slightly and the two puppets fly in the direction of Jiro and Mareo. The two puppets, Jiro (puppet form) grapples Mareo, and Mareo (puppet form) grapples Jiro. On both Jiro and Mareo (puppets) a long sharp blade shoots from both of their stomachs and, as the puppets are bear-hugging the real Jiro and Mareo, the blades pierce through them and they drop to the ground. Looking closer at those blades you would also be able to tell that they were covered in a poison, this poison is a speciality of Kenji's that has no known antidote. Jiro and Mareo (the puppets) are then pulled back in by Kenji and unsummoned as the real Jiro and Mareo are left to die outside the house. Lucky, Lee was asleep so a story will be made up on how they died and their bodies will be disposed of before the next day.
The next morn...
Lee wakes up and looks around the room.
Lee: "Hey Kenji, good morning. You know where Jiro and Mareo are?"
Kenji: "Them? Last night they went out to go and kill some Leaf Shinobi, turns out they died."
Lee: "Thank God, I hated them so much. Anyways," Lee looks over a Nakatoro who is sitting a table reading some files. "What are we going to be doing today, we are pretty much done with the HQ so I want to go on a mission or something."
Nakatoro looks up and begins to speak. "I have a mission planned for today, do not worry."
Kenji: "Well, what is it hmm?"
Nakatoro pulls out a scroll and tosses it at Kenji. "There it is, happy? I stole it from the Hokage's office last night, it is S-Ranked."
Kenji opens up the scroll and reads it aloud. "Konohagakure, this is a dire emergency! We are here camping out in the Land of Rice and we are afraid we may be attacked by the Jounin on guard outside of Otogakure. We are two chunnin from Rain Village that need assistence in defeating the Jounin because we are injured and low on supplies. We also request that you help the two of us escort the civilian that we rescued. Signed, Kyoki and Lonin of the Village Hidden in Rain. That is what it says, so are we going to help them?"
Nakatoro looks at Kenji with a look. "Somewhat, we are going to help them, take the reward, then kill them and take the rest of their ryo. With this mission executed successfully we should have enough ryo to finish Shinugakure."
Lee: "Alright, so are you comnig to Nakatoro-Sensai?"
Nakatoro shakes his head. "No, no I am not."
Kenji: "Don't worry Lee, this should be simple enough. Lets pack up and get going."
To prepare Kenji loads fifteen puppet scrolls into his pouch, 2 smoke bombs, three explosive tags, an antidote, 10 kunai, 5 shuriken, and 6 poison bombs. On the other hand, when Lee prepares he grabs a Demonblade (greatsword) and sticks it on his back along with 6 first-aid kits, 20 shurikens, and 12 explosive tags.
Lee: "Lets get going then."
As they head out of the Forest of Death they make there way to the Outskirts of the Hidden Leaf Village, two Leaf Shinobi are seen hanging out near the southern part of the Outskirts sparring.
Kenji: "Are you prepared to take these guys out Lee, you are going to be doing it yourself?"
Lee: "Yeah, this should be fun." Lee then runs over towards the two sparring shinobi at a lightning fast speed and pulls out his Demonblade. He runs up to the first one who looks weakend and slices at his skull. The genin, not having time to react, gets his skull chopped in two. The other man, being a chunnin of lower status flips around and looks at Lee.
Chunnin Guy: "What the heck is your problem???"
Lee just looks at him then sprints and yells out the name of the jutsu he uses. "Eight Trigrams: Sixty-Four Palms!" He runs at the chunnin and like a blur hits him and knocks him out. He then takes the Demonblade and cuts his head off laughing. "Kenji, we're good to go."
So the two missing shinobi, Lee and Kenji continued onward to the Land of Rice. After about an hour of extremely fast travel they arrive in Rice Country.
Lee: "So where are they exactly?"
Kenji points in the direction of three people hiding in a shelter of rocks. "That is them."
Lee and Kenji run in their direction and begin to act like friends.
Lee: "Hello, we are ANBU from Konohagakure, you requested assistence back to Rain Village?"
Rain Chunnin One: "Yes, yes, thank you!!!"
Rain Chunnin Two: "Hello, I am Firo and this is my pal Rikon. This is a civilian we rescued named Akatiro. If you could please defeat those three Sound Jounin over there it would be quite helpful."
Akatiro: "Yes, then escort us all back to Rain."
Kenji: "Alright, let us then Lee." Lee and Kenji searched throughout the area and found the three Oto Shinobi.
Sound Jounin Leader: "Hey! Look over there guys! More Leaf scum for us to eat!!" The leader of this group is nearly 8 feet tall and has huge muscles.
Sound Jounin One: "Lets eat 'em boss man!" The first of the two group members is a slim man with two steel arm and a knife for each of his hands.
Sound Jounin Two: "I call the man in white!" The second of the two group members has a deformed face and a sharingan eye.
Lee pulls out the Demonblade and stares at the Sound Jounin who called him out. "Prepare to die!!!" He throws the Demonblade at him then flickers so he is once again holding the blade. As he grasps it he jumps into the air and slices the mans neck in two. "How do you like me now???" He looks at the Jounin as he drops dead.
Kenji: "Save one for me why don't cha Lee?"
Lee sighs while looking at Kenji "I will try Kenji."
Kenji then pulls out the puppet scrolls and summons Jiro and Mareo. "Hey, it is the puppets I made for our dead friends!"
Lee, while looking confusedly at Kenji, watchs the other striking Sound Jounin from the corner of his eye and slices his head off as well, laughing. "And then, there was one."
Kenji: "He is mine, why don't you go back to the three guys eh Lee?"
Lee: "Sure, why not?"
As Lee heads back to the two shinobi and the civilian, Kenji slightly moves his fingers signalling his puppets, Jiro and Mareo, to strike at the Leader.
Sound Jounin Leader: "Don't expect to hit me!!!" The Sound Jounin trys to flicker out of the way but he doesn't realize that the real Kenji is already waiting in the spot he knows that would be open. Kenji waits with a kunai in hand and as the Leader flickers to the position Kenji throws the kunai into the air then it falls and lands on the leaders head as he was not paying much attention. The leader then begins to bleed ffrom the head but doesn't die.
Sound Jounin Leader: "God!!! What was that for?" The leader then pulls out a long katana and runs quickly at Kenji prepared to strike. "Die boy!!"
Kenji: "Why don't you meet my friend Jiro eh?"
A claw covered in poison then ejects from Jiro's hand and he flys over in the direction of the Sound Jounin and claws him in the head, decapitating him. Kenji laughs, unsummons his puppets, then returns to the four others.
Kenji: "That was much too simple eh Lee?"
Lee: "Yeah, pretty easy my pal!" He highfives Kenji but then get back to business."
Firo: "Thanks, now we should get back to Rain before more come to kill us eh Rikon?"
Rikon: "Yeah, lets go."
So the five people head back towards Rain slowly running because they are with a civilian. After a few hours of travel at a normal running pace they get to Rain.
Lee: "So, you have a reward for us?"
Firo: "Yes, yes, of course." Firo reachs into his pocket and pulls out 200 ryo handing it to Lee. Rikon then reachs into his pocket as well and pulls out 500 ryo handing it to Lee as well. "There is your pay, now leave us."
Kenji: "Now, let us Lee."
Lee: "Of course my friend."
Lee pulls out his Demonblade and Kenji throws an explosive tag onto the edge of it. Lee swings it at the three of them then Kenji handsigns on impact for it to explode. Within a simple movement the three people are taken out dead and the two Missing Shinobi laugh.
Lee: "Ahh...the good ol' days."
Kenji: "Take their money and let's get out of here before we get caught and have to fight even more."
So the two Missing Shinobi headed back to Shinugakure with pockets full of ryo, 3000 ryo to be exact. After two hours they arrive back in Shinugakure. Nakatoro sits there waiting for them.
Nakatoro: "Took you both long enough. Where's my money men?"
Lee reachs into his pouch and pulls out the 3000 ryo handing it to Nakatoro.
Lee: "There you go boss, leave us be." Lee then walks to his bed and crashes for the night.
Kenji: "Agh.. I think he may have to go soon as well."
Nakatoro: "Why?"
Lee: "He is stealing all my kills." He sorta glares at Nakatoro sarcastically.
Nakatoro laughs. "Yes, very funny Kenji, now go get some rest. We have a long day ahead of us tomorrow, and by 'we' I mean you two. So go get some rest why don't cha?"
Kenji nods and heads off towards his bed. The group now having only three members left. There HQ nearly complete. The legend of Shinugakure will soon no longer be a myth.