Post by Gaara on Mar 5, 2010 21:18:50 GMT -5
Shinugakure's Rise
Written by: Jake Abela (Me)
Idea's by: Thomas Stachowski, Jake Abela, Andreus Gobis, and Johnathan Morris.
Inspired by the series written by Masashi Kishimoto.
Prologue: Fall of ANBU, Rise of a Village
On the streets of the Hidden Leaf Village, five ANBU sit and chat about their previous encounters, and just some random things.
The first one to begin talking is a dark haired puppet master raised in Sunagakure, his named is Kenji Chinfu.
Kenji: "That previous mission could not have gone any worse Mareo, maybe next time you shouldn't play with your fire as they say, if you play with fire, prepare to get burned."
Mareo Chinfu, brother of the legendary puppet master Kenji. As a boy he was expected to be a legend and puppet master himself, instead he decided to take the path of fire jutsu's. He has light brown hair and two blue eyes.
Mareo: "Man, what did I do wrong Kenji?!?!? I owned the suckers like they were nothing!"
Then, the man to Kenji's left begins to speak. This man is Jiro Yushi. Jiro is a skilled genjutsu master, and the second son of Nakatoro, one of the other ANBU in the group. He is thought of as one of the more skilled genjutsu users in Leaf. At age 16 he is a younger shinobi in the group so he has much more potential to unlock. He has long red hair that covers his eyes but under that hair if you look closely at his left eye you can see that it is red, he posses sharingan.
Jiro spins around and sends a focused pulse of mind numbing chakra at Mareo. "Body Shutdown" Mareo drops to the ground unconsious for the time being.
Jiro: "Gosh, your brother really needs to learn to quiet down Kenji. Next time he gets to loud I am killing him."
Then the leader of the group, Nakatoro Yushi speaks up, disappointed in his son, Jiro. Nakatoro doesn't look much different then Jiro excet that he is older and as two sharingan eyes.
Nakatoro: "Jiro, we do not attack members of our group even if they get loud on occasions."
Jiro: "It is not occasions, it is always."
Then a man dressed in all white with two byakugan eyes looks up into Jiro's eyes. He has short, spiked black hair but his eyes pierce with seriousness. He is the last in the group hanging out on a set of stairs.
Lee: "Jiro and Kenji, you are to be quiet now."
Jiro: "No! I will not be quiet! You can shut up weirdo!"
Lee: "Quiet" Lee's eyes pierce into Jiro's with extreme inpatience.
Jiro: "Make me."
Lee: "So you wanna play that game eh?"
Jiro simply nods and Lee looks him in the eyes and pulls out a 4 foot long blade. Lee walks over to Jiro and holds it above his head. "Quiet, now." Jiro then excalms "NO!" and right as these words leave his huge mouth, Lee swiftly pulls the blade down. With pin-point accuracy the blade cuts Jiro's mouth clean off, and his lower half of his face is pretty much gone for good. Jiro in reaction starts to grab his bleeding face swiftly tries to yell but all you can here is gurgle gurgle gurgle under the mass amounts of blood pouring out.
Lee: "Now, will you do the honors Kenji?" Kenji reachs into his backpack and pulls out some glue and a metal cracked lower half of a face. He puts the glue onto the mask then slams it onto Jiro's lower face, the blood still seeps through the bottom for a while but Nakatoro quickly heals that.
Jiro then simply sits there thinking about what just happenend within the last five minutes. He simply puts his and up, extends his middle finger, and points it at Lee. Jiro was disabled to speak for the rest of his days.
Later..
The five members wait patiently in the lower level of the Hokages office, Lee quietly reads, Nakatoro sits and talks to Kenji, Jiro flicks his new metal face, and Mareo flicks fire around in his palms.
Nakatoro: "Kenji, as we predicted the group is slowly becoming more corrupt, soon, our plan shall unfold successfully."
Kenji: "So we are going through with the plan to create Shinugakure in the Forest of Death?"
Nakatoro: "Yes, but don't expect the three others to last much longer, think of them as presents hidden in the closet on christmas, three new puppets waiting, in reach, but you must wait until it is time."
Kenji simply nods and the Hokage, Lady Tsunade, comes down from here office and motions them to come up.
Tsunade: "Do you know why you are here today?"
Nakatoro: "I believe it may be because our recently failed mission."
Tsunade nods, "You are aware you let five of our shinobi die and still failed your mission? ANBU are sent out on missions and are fully expected to complete them, your group however, has failed the last four missions."
Nakatoro: "I understand Lady Hokage"
Tsunade: "I only have one thing to say, you are no longer ANBU of the Hidden Leaf Village."
Jiro's eyes widen under his dark red hair but he can't say a thing so he simply expresses his feelings of hatred in his eyes.
Kenji: "Very Well Lady Hokage."
Among Nakatoro and Kenji a small whisper is slightly heard, but all Tsuande can make out is "Now." Then a cloud of smoke explodes within the room and a window is heard shattering. As the smoke clears the Five Ex-ANBU are nowhere in sight, but with this single decision, they have become fugitives and criminals, missing ninja perhaps you would call them.
Nakatoro: "Guys, meet up in the Forest of Death, don't get caught" Nakatoro poofs off into the distance.
Kenji: "You heard him, get out of here and into the Forest of Death, pronto." With these words Kenji hops up onto of a building and begins leaping towards the exit of the village.
Jiro simply sprints as fast as possible in the shadows of the village and towards the exit. Mareo runs right behind Jiro but a bit slower and Lee poofs of into the distance as well.
Later in the Forest of Death...
Nakatoro: "This is the end of a long life as Shinobi of the Hidden Leaf Village, we now will begin our life as Missing Shinobi, and the five of us will start a new village here in the Forest of Death."
Mareo: "A new village?!?!?"
Lee: "What?!? Another Village?!??"
Jiro simply stands there wide eyed but okay with the plan.
Kenji: "Yes, we are now to take on different disguises, we must store our ANBU outfits for later use, but for now we will work on building and concealing our new village. Shinugakure, The Village Hidden in Death."
So the five shinobi begin there work on a village which is known about by few, and most who hear the name Shinugakure, don't live to tell of the tale...and so begins the legend, of Shinugakure.
Written by: Jake Abela (Me)
Idea's by: Thomas Stachowski, Jake Abela, Andreus Gobis, and Johnathan Morris.
Inspired by the series written by Masashi Kishimoto.
Prologue: Fall of ANBU, Rise of a Village
On the streets of the Hidden Leaf Village, five ANBU sit and chat about their previous encounters, and just some random things.
The first one to begin talking is a dark haired puppet master raised in Sunagakure, his named is Kenji Chinfu.
Kenji: "That previous mission could not have gone any worse Mareo, maybe next time you shouldn't play with your fire as they say, if you play with fire, prepare to get burned."
Mareo Chinfu, brother of the legendary puppet master Kenji. As a boy he was expected to be a legend and puppet master himself, instead he decided to take the path of fire jutsu's. He has light brown hair and two blue eyes.
Mareo: "Man, what did I do wrong Kenji?!?!? I owned the suckers like they were nothing!"
Then, the man to Kenji's left begins to speak. This man is Jiro Yushi. Jiro is a skilled genjutsu master, and the second son of Nakatoro, one of the other ANBU in the group. He is thought of as one of the more skilled genjutsu users in Leaf. At age 16 he is a younger shinobi in the group so he has much more potential to unlock. He has long red hair that covers his eyes but under that hair if you look closely at his left eye you can see that it is red, he posses sharingan.
Jiro spins around and sends a focused pulse of mind numbing chakra at Mareo. "Body Shutdown" Mareo drops to the ground unconsious for the time being.
Jiro: "Gosh, your brother really needs to learn to quiet down Kenji. Next time he gets to loud I am killing him."
Then the leader of the group, Nakatoro Yushi speaks up, disappointed in his son, Jiro. Nakatoro doesn't look much different then Jiro excet that he is older and as two sharingan eyes.
Nakatoro: "Jiro, we do not attack members of our group even if they get loud on occasions."
Jiro: "It is not occasions, it is always."
Then a man dressed in all white with two byakugan eyes looks up into Jiro's eyes. He has short, spiked black hair but his eyes pierce with seriousness. He is the last in the group hanging out on a set of stairs.
Lee: "Jiro and Kenji, you are to be quiet now."
Jiro: "No! I will not be quiet! You can shut up weirdo!"
Lee: "Quiet" Lee's eyes pierce into Jiro's with extreme inpatience.
Jiro: "Make me."
Lee: "So you wanna play that game eh?"
Jiro simply nods and Lee looks him in the eyes and pulls out a 4 foot long blade. Lee walks over to Jiro and holds it above his head. "Quiet, now." Jiro then excalms "NO!" and right as these words leave his huge mouth, Lee swiftly pulls the blade down. With pin-point accuracy the blade cuts Jiro's mouth clean off, and his lower half of his face is pretty much gone for good. Jiro in reaction starts to grab his bleeding face swiftly tries to yell but all you can here is gurgle gurgle gurgle under the mass amounts of blood pouring out.
Lee: "Now, will you do the honors Kenji?" Kenji reachs into his backpack and pulls out some glue and a metal cracked lower half of a face. He puts the glue onto the mask then slams it onto Jiro's lower face, the blood still seeps through the bottom for a while but Nakatoro quickly heals that.
Jiro then simply sits there thinking about what just happenend within the last five minutes. He simply puts his and up, extends his middle finger, and points it at Lee. Jiro was disabled to speak for the rest of his days.
Later..
The five members wait patiently in the lower level of the Hokages office, Lee quietly reads, Nakatoro sits and talks to Kenji, Jiro flicks his new metal face, and Mareo flicks fire around in his palms.
Nakatoro: "Kenji, as we predicted the group is slowly becoming more corrupt, soon, our plan shall unfold successfully."
Kenji: "So we are going through with the plan to create Shinugakure in the Forest of Death?"
Nakatoro: "Yes, but don't expect the three others to last much longer, think of them as presents hidden in the closet on christmas, three new puppets waiting, in reach, but you must wait until it is time."
Kenji simply nods and the Hokage, Lady Tsunade, comes down from here office and motions them to come up.
Tsunade: "Do you know why you are here today?"
Nakatoro: "I believe it may be because our recently failed mission."
Tsunade nods, "You are aware you let five of our shinobi die and still failed your mission? ANBU are sent out on missions and are fully expected to complete them, your group however, has failed the last four missions."
Nakatoro: "I understand Lady Hokage"
Tsunade: "I only have one thing to say, you are no longer ANBU of the Hidden Leaf Village."
Jiro's eyes widen under his dark red hair but he can't say a thing so he simply expresses his feelings of hatred in his eyes.
Kenji: "Very Well Lady Hokage."
Among Nakatoro and Kenji a small whisper is slightly heard, but all Tsuande can make out is "Now." Then a cloud of smoke explodes within the room and a window is heard shattering. As the smoke clears the Five Ex-ANBU are nowhere in sight, but with this single decision, they have become fugitives and criminals, missing ninja perhaps you would call them.
Nakatoro: "Guys, meet up in the Forest of Death, don't get caught" Nakatoro poofs off into the distance.
Kenji: "You heard him, get out of here and into the Forest of Death, pronto." With these words Kenji hops up onto of a building and begins leaping towards the exit of the village.
Jiro simply sprints as fast as possible in the shadows of the village and towards the exit. Mareo runs right behind Jiro but a bit slower and Lee poofs of into the distance as well.
Later in the Forest of Death...
Nakatoro: "This is the end of a long life as Shinobi of the Hidden Leaf Village, we now will begin our life as Missing Shinobi, and the five of us will start a new village here in the Forest of Death."
Mareo: "A new village?!?!?"
Lee: "What?!? Another Village?!??"
Jiro simply stands there wide eyed but okay with the plan.
Kenji: "Yes, we are now to take on different disguises, we must store our ANBU outfits for later use, but for now we will work on building and concealing our new village. Shinugakure, The Village Hidden in Death."
So the five shinobi begin there work on a village which is known about by few, and most who hear the name Shinugakure, don't live to tell of the tale...and so begins the legend, of Shinugakure.
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