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Post by Red on Nov 10, 2009 17:24:30 GMT -5
Before i go into detail i want to say this. The Desends and the heirokemi where my creation from long long ago. They have been with me since the first naruto server and i love them very much so i would ask that this be taken seriously. I dont do a whole lot in the way of contests so this is a one time thing. I am opening up the desend clan to one lucky person. This contest will be to attain the tittle of desend and the ability to unlock the heirokemi in that player. In order to take part you need to submit a bio of the charicter but first i need to give people so insight on the desend clan and illuminate the darkness behind them. This clan has a deep root in the village leaf and cannot be from any place else unless the story REALLY demands it. First is there distinguishing parts. The Desend clan has a symbol though the two current members alive do not wear it. You can incorporate it in your story. The Desend clans men are known to have jet black hair (They can dye it however) and facial features usually resemble vindels. Females of the clan are known to have snow white hair (Again they can dye it) Now to unravel some of the mystery: Vindel desend grew up as a loyal shinobi to leaf around the time of the sanin of leaf. He was the founder of the clan desend and worked with orochimaru for a time as a partner in his research. Vindel always took interest in the same things as Orochimaru but when Orochimaru left Vindel stayed and built a deep seaded hate for orochimaru. Vindel soon became high up in the ANBU black ops and came to be part of there best squad consisting of himself and still a few classified shinobi. Vindel and many members of the black ops squad where known for being womanizers so it was not uncommon for him to have one or more mistresses, However he settled down with a woman from snow before the years got to far on. He had 4 daughters, and 3 sons. Durring this time dark thoughts where building in vindels mind he was willing to sacrifice everything for power... no for science. He joined a group called the bloodline hunters in his presuite of science. Durring this time however he was working on something, He had created the heirokemi before giveing birth to these children and he had not revealed it to anyone. That is except his students Takahiro and Levantis. He worked long and hard on many different jutsus creating them behind leafs back until one day he was approached by none other than Itachi Uchiha the man who had influenced his pursute to create the heirokemi. Vindel Joined the Akatsuki behind the back of leaf... His eldest son Hakoji was the only one to show promis of the heirokemi and that is why they expect that he was spared... For vindel one night slaughtered his whole family, and when the report came out it was sealed behind locked doors that vindel had slaughtered his entire clan. The kage at the time decreed that Hakoji be brought to the southern villages of leaf and relocated every few years. The only thing vindel left hakoji with was a scar across his eye other than that vindel left him unharmed. Now is where you come in. Do you try to play off as one of vindels illegitimate children during a mission or do you come up with a reason one of his children where saved. The choice is up to you. You will mold the desends clan history from here.... Go forth players of naruto and give me a story that i will feel honored to add to this entwining epic. To clarify the desends to not 'come with' the heirokemi. They must endure a dramatic event in their lives where the heirokemi awakens. Such as, your inches from death and facing an akatsuki who stands face to face with you and is threatening death. You are then able to activate the heirokemi for the first time. From then on it works as a normal dojutsu. Most people dont know they have the heirokemi if its unawakened in them. A side note: i know there are plenty of spelling errors. Deal with it Everyone can participate i feel this should be open to dms and pcs alike.
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Post by Tobi (Hitaku) on Nov 10, 2009 18:15:56 GMT -5
(The name and eye color can be changed to fit the clan more just needed something there)
Name: Zekuro Desend Rank: Genin Gender: Male Age: 15 Hair colour: Jet Black Eye colour: Grey Height: 5'11" Weight: 165 lbs Village: Leaf
After Vindel had slaughtered his entire clan, they had Anbu and Medicel teams taking care of all the bodys. One of the Anbu saw one of the bodys moving it was a males body. The Anbu told the medical ninja that one might still be alive. They wanted to save the body but they bearly did he was lossing alot of blood as the medics did there best to stop he bleeding. Even though the kid was still badly hurt. One of the Anbu wanted to alert the Hokage, But the Anbu leader of the squad said not to tell anyone about this he had the medical team and his fellow Anbu to not say a word about this. They kid the kid under close watch that day with a medical team incase anything happened. Later that night when the village was sleeping the Leader of that Anbu sqaud had said that they need to get the kid out of the village incase word has gotten out. they snock out he kid and the small team of four medical ninja. They traveled at night and sleept during the day to make sure no once will see them. No one knew where they were going but the Anbu leader. Even the leader didn't say where they are heading when the teamed asked him. Only few words he kept saying. "To a safe place". The sqaud agreed with him as the leader of them, But they got lost even the Anbu couldn't figure where they were. The Leader knew and had a surprise for them. That night when it turned first sight of dusk and time to set up camp. The leader of the Anbu stayed up that morning as he went outside the camp and deep inside of rice country (Where they were the whole time). When night came the sqaud and medical team woken up by a large noise as the Anbu leader was around the sqaud with Sound ninja around surrounding them, They had no where to go. A shadow was in the background he was staring at the boys Symbal on his back of the Desend Clan. The Soundies and the Anbu Leader killed his sqaud and the medical team making sure no one was alive. After they did it Orochimaru came from the shadows, The Anbu leader kneeled to him and said. "A child from Desend as you wished for". Orochimaru was pleased about this and told Kabuto to take the kid to his lab. The Anbu was geting worryed "What about my reword?" The Anbu leader said. Orochimaru just smiled and said "Hes your reword" As Orochi took his sound from his mouth and cut the Anbu leaders head off. "We don't need him anymore". Later that day Kabuto and Orochi were in there lab taking care of the kid and trying to bring him back to good shape. The kid had not wokeen for some time he was asleep for 2 years coming and going in his thoughts, But orochimaru didn't want to give up on his and kept saying "I finaly have a Child of Vindels, I know he was working on something" Kabuto told Orochi that it was useless to try to help the kid he will be dead in the lond run. Orochimaru just told him to keep trying as, Kabuto did he best trying with the kid and one day he just pasted out cold on the floor from his endless use of hcakra trying to bring the kid back. Orochimaru was about to kill the kid, but he did not. He throw him in a cell just to keep him in. Two mouths later a small cry was coming from a cell. Kabuto heared it and went and opend the cell to his surprise the kid was alive and was really skiny in the corner of the cell kabuto feed him as he took him to Orochimaru's quaters. Orochimaru was very pleased to see the kid to make with an evil grin on him. Orochimaru asked the kid what he knew of his father and any of his expermints, But the kid didn't know the only thing the kid knew was his mother, father and his own name. Orochimaru was geting angry and was thinking that this was waste of time and Vindel must have not been working on anything on the kids. Kabuto wrote the info down about the kids as Orochimaru said just to dump the kid in Fire North. Kabuto did what he wished and had Sound grunts take him to the egde of Rice and Fire. He was in crueled up by the lake as a mercurt saw him and told him to hop on that he will take him to the closest village. The mercet took him to the gate of Leaf village. The ninja on duty of the time saw the kids symbal on his back as they quickly coverd the kid with a coat and took him to the hokage emediatly. The hokage was surprised that a member of the Desen clan was still alive and tryed to ask the kid about where he was and who he was but the kid was too scared to awsner the questions. They kept this under top secret, The hokage had the kid living in an room in the hokage building. The kid still looked young and he finaliy said his age. He was 13. The hokage had meidcal ninja cover up the symbal on his back as they put him in the academy. "If he was anything like his father, or Hakoji he would do great" Zekuro failed the test to become genin, he trained even harder as it was time to take another test to see if he can passed, he passed the test with flying colors at the age of 15 as he is now on his way to becoming a ninja. ~Fin~
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Post by Kaz on Nov 10, 2009 20:18:00 GMT -5
Name: Nagai Zenmetsu (Desend) Alias(s): None Village: Konohagakure (Leaf) Rank: Academy Student Gender: Male Age: 10 .::Physical Appearance::. Eye Color: Dark Blue, really close to Black Hair Color & Style: Deep Black Hair Height: 4'2" Weight: 65lbs Build: Skinny Skin-Tone: Tan Tattoos & Body Art: None Scars: None Piercings: None Other distinguishing mark: None .::Personal Info::. Personality: Nagai is the type of innocent kid who doesnt know much about life. He loves his adoptive family, but he is not aware of his Desend blood. Family: Two elder brothers and a big sister, father and mother(Adoptive) Relationship with family: They are overprotective, but it's only because they swore the oath to protect him with their lives, he still loves them. Occupation: Shinobi Strengths: Ninjustsu Specialization: None Weaknesses: You can intimidate him easily. .:History:. It was the evening of the youngest son of the Desend family... Nagai was playing with his older brother, the one who is not Hakoji. His four sisters were talking about boys at the academy mainly, but sometimes, they were laughing. Nagai didn't know why. Him and his brother were playing hide and seek in the Living room. Their mother was cooking the cake for Nagai's birthday. Vindel, the father, was out, probably for a late night job. His wife wasn't worrying about anything, happy to cook the cake of her son. In parallel, Nagai was hiding under the parents' bed, holding a laugh. His brother sneaked inside without making a sound. They were both very young. Nagai crawled toward the side of the Queen sized bed and peeked to see if his brother was there. His brother was there, moving his eyes around the room with a serious look. This one spotted Nagai under the bed and quickly joined him, placing a hand on his little brother's mouth. Nagai thought it was part of the game, so he was laughing silently, looking at his brother who had the eyes of someone scared. Suddenly... Nagai and his brother heard the house door open really slowly, screeching, followed with a few step sounds. The brothers held their breath and listened to what it sounded like a conversation. "Daddy!" Nagai thought. "He must be trying to make a surprise for me!". Nagai pushed his brother a bit and started to crawl out of under the bed. He moved the blanket that was touching the floor and peeked out. The room door was closed, so he couldn't see anything. He stood up and walked to the door, opening it. He ran in the kitchen and noticed that the cake was finished... But there was a some red thing on it. Nagai continued to walk and found a large pool of the same red thing. Nagai remembered his brother Hakoji having something that looked like that on his body after training, sometimes. The kiddo was starting to worry about his family. Something was telling him that he had to run away quickly. Nagai followed the blood that was even continuing in the living room. Nagai peeked in the living room and found bodies. One looked like his mother, who was in a sitting position on the couch with a few of his sisters sitting next to her. They all had huge smiles... Almost fake. Nagai grinned and forward and hugged his mom. She was really cold, but he didn't care, until he heard footsteps behind him. The kid just noticed that his mom wasn't moving and nudged her. She still wasn't moving. He turned slowly to face the person he was looking for... His father! Vindel was wearing a black coat, his ANBU ninja-to in his right hand. The papa looked down on his little son and patted his head with a weak smile. He then showed him the cake, tossing it at his feet. "Happy Birthday" he said. "I want you to heritate my researches and continue on my path...In case Hakoji doesn't do it". Nagai nodded and started to cry loudly. Vindel was hearing that people were starting to look out of their houses windows to see what was happening. Nagai's father tried to slash off Nagai's head with a swing of his Ninja-To, thinking that he was stupid, thinking that his little son could become someone like him. But something stopped him... A kunai. The elder sister was infront of Nagai, a kunai in her hand. Vindel smirked and slashed her in the chest again, she fell on the carpet, soon, becoming a red pool of blood. The traitorous father went out of the house and left his little son, crying all alone... A policeman passed infront of the house and entered, wondering who was crying and why the door was opened. He found the slaughter scene, a small kid crying alone. The policeman called the HQ and told them about what he had found. Sasaki Zenmetsu's father was a Policeman at the time. The Hokage of the time came quickly after hearing that it was the Desend little son. She took the little kid in her arms, damning whoever did that and asked for the the present people, who wanted to take Nagai and raise him like their own son. Nobody wanted to take him, by fear that Vindel might come and try to take him away again. Mister Zenmetsu walked up with a brave look and said "I will take this kid and raise him like my own son. I swear it". The Hokage smiled a bit and handed him the sleeping kid. Mr. Zenmetsu took him and went to his house. His wife was really happy to have another kid to take care of. Mr. Zenmetsu went back to the crime scene and found a White shirt with a big collar, with the symbol of the clan in the back. The day after, the Zenmetsu man came back home and hid the shirt. Nobody had the guts to tell him that he was part of the Desend clan. He lived on as a Zenmetsu, forgetting about the night of his birthday... -THE END- Now, he looks like this:
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Post by kain delvin on Nov 10, 2009 23:54:54 GMT -5
Name: Perry Glimor(real name: Kichiku Desend) Rank: Chunin Gender: Male Age: 12 Hair colour: black now, ic'ly no one knows why it's no longer red Eye colour: red now, has colored contacts in, real eye color is green Height: 4'2 Weight: 87 lbs Village: Leaf
the youngest of vindel's sons, kichiku was usually left to play alone. he always wished to be a scientist like his dad however everytime vindel let him into the lab(which wasnt very often) he would break the test tubes that were within his reach. it was this reason that made vindel ban him from the lab. Kichiku then started spending his time following his older siblings around, believing them to be the coolest people ever.
on one of his secret followings of his siblings he got seperated from them, getting lost in the market of konoha. in the hustle and bustle of the market he started getting trampled and bumped around which really upset him, causing him to sit down right in the middle of the road and started crying. it was then that a red headed lil boy little older then kichiku found him there. "hey kid, dont cry...i'll show you my friends"
smiling and wiping his eye's clear of the tears kichiku stands up and follows the boy into an ally where the rest of the pact of kid's come out greeting kichiku. finally he had a place to hang out when the rest of his brothers and sisters didnt want him about. his best friend in the group was named 'perry glimor'.
kichiku and perry had came up with a plan, kichiku wanted to have parents that didnt work all the time and perry wanted brothers and sisters. so slowly they came up with the plan that every other weekend they'd switch places to see what it was like. however there was a problem, there hair color was different and so were there facces. despairing that they're plan wouldnt work out they started asking the other kids for advice. one older kid told them that they could die there hair, it wouldnt wash out fast but it would stay for a couple weeks. having fixed that problem they ahd to figure out how to change there faces. it was then that kichiku just gave up on figureing it out and said it'd work for now since none of his family ever paid him enough attention they wouldnt notice.
working for weeks on there plan in secret they were finally ready to go. perry got some pen ink and poured it over his head to die his hair black while kichiku got a red chemical from vindel's lab the next time he got to visit vindels lab. pouring the chemical over his head it did in fact die his hair, however it also poisoned him, knocking him out.
perry, not knowing that kichiku wasnt ok, went on and snuck into the vindel's house. Just as he was getting into kichiku's bed about to go to sleep vindel came in and killed him believing him to be kichiku.
Kichiku woke up a while later having no memories of anything. he wandered around till perry's parents found him and took him in, believing him to be perry. and so he grew up believing himself to be perry glimor, and everyone thinking he had died that fateful night.
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Post by Dm Anko on Nov 11, 2009 0:15:42 GMT -5
Locked till some things are ironed out.
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Post by Dm Anko on Nov 11, 2009 9:28:44 GMT -5
Issue Resolved. Unlocked. Please continue. (It should also be noted that the winner of the clan will still need to pay tokens for it)
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Post by Red on Nov 11, 2009 13:23:23 GMT -5
(Yea a side note to delude the confusion is that this is for the desend clan not for the heirokemi. This however means that at any time you wish you can pay for the heirokemi for the char that you win i belive shikamaru said i can cut the cost down to 35 as well for the winner)
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Post by Red on Nov 22, 2009 17:23:28 GMT -5
December 8th this contest will close.
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Post by Ino Yamanaka on Nov 23, 2009 22:08:21 GMT -5
--------------------------------------------------------------------- Name : Izanami Desend Age : Sixteen Height : 5'1" Weight : 113 lbs. Hair Colour : Snow White Eye Colour : Deep Sea Blue Current Village : Amekagure (Village hidden in the Rain)
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The sky was bright, and the air cold. So cold, you could hear the crisp sound of your feet breaking the frost that covers the grass over the ground. You could see your breath, as it is warmer than the air. It was around midday in Konohagakure, the sun high in the sky. Winter was just around the corner, as everyone seemed dressed warmly, and there were shops selling Hot Chocolate all around. Today was a perfect day...
Suddenly, there was a smoke that filled the day sky, leaving a shadow looming over the village as everyone seemed shocked. Something was going on. Soon after, ANBU black ops appeared at the scene of the smoke... it seemed like a minour explosion, nothing too extreme, except the excess of smoke. A smoke bomb. "Search the house!" Screamed ANBU Captain Daisuke. The house was filled with the smoke as the ANBU members rushed in, searching. It was the Desend household, as everyone crowded it.
"Hmm... I wonder if this'll piss off Vindel any..?" Kimmimaru looks to his 'prize', Izanami Desend, second child of Vindel, as he leaps far from Konohagakure. As he nears Otogakure, the girl awakens, as she lets out a very quiet yawn, that would only barely disrupt the silence that followed them. Kimmimaru looked down to the girl as he notices her awakening. "... She was unconscious from the smoke, I thought..? No matter.. we're almost there."
He lands directly at Otogakure's hidden gates in the Land of Rice. A most concealed gate indeed, as it was hidden by genjutsu. He announced his name outwards, as the gate revealed itself and opened. He walked inwards, into the darkness that is Otogakure. He looked around, wondering where he'd be welcomed at. The walls were intricately carved with ominous figures. There seemed to be hundreds of rooms just lining the maze-like village.
"Have you brought his new 'experiment'?" Asked a shadowy figure.. as it walked into the light of the cracked ceiling, it appeared to be no other than Kabuto, Orochimaru's right hand. "Yes... are you sure he wanted this girl?" Kimmimaru asked him quietly, trying not to frighten the child. "Indeed he did," Kabuto replied. "Great work, Kimmimaru... I'll be assigning you another mission shortly." Kimmimaru noded, and walked to one of the hundreds of rooms.
Back at Konohagakure, Vindel had been searching for his lost child. "Where is she...?" He seemed to be mumbling to himself quietly. "This isn't good... I'm in the middle of my research too.." The ANBU Captain just stares to him blankly, absent of words. "Well? I'd rather my child not missing.." Vindel groaned slightly as he continued looking through several papers. "Where was Hakoji?" He nearly demanded the question. The ANBU replied hesitantly, "H-He was out studying.. The boy wants to be a shinobi, it seems" Vindel didn't even move according to the reply. "I already knew.. But that's fine. Please leave, I'm quite busy." The ANBU Captain nodded and flickered out of his research chamber.
During this time, Orochimaru already had her in a state of unconsciousness as he began doing all sorts of odd things to her. He began by using some odd syringe that didn't seem to have much effect on Izanami's body. "Hnnn... Why didn't it work? All the others have died from this much... Maybe you just gave me the wrong one, Kabuto!" Orochimaru hissed at his subbordinate. "No.. I'm pretty sure that was the one... Hm.. Maybe she has some sort of natural resistance?" "How?! I didn't think it was possible to resist it!" The snake-sage shouted loudly. "It's supposed to change their body completely!" Kabuto just let out a deep sigh as he checks over his clipboard several times over. "Hm.. that is very odd... maybe she's immune to the Curse Seal too... but we can't test that yet, she would die from it." "Hrnnn.... Try solution two." Orochimaru ordered.
They began piercing her skin with the second syringe as nothing happened. It was as if she was immune to all internal changes. "Guaah! Kabuto! I want her experiment worthy! That means I want her to change when I tell her to, I don't care even if you break her!" Kabuto sighed lightly and nodded...
Several hours passed, as Kabuto ran hundreds of tests on her, to find out what was rejecting the solutions. It seemed to be some sort of protection seal that was placed on her stomach beforehand. "Hm... I wonder who did this? Probably to protect her... but I've never seen a seal like this before..." Kabuto scribbled down on his notes quickly.
A year later, Izanami was six years of age. Kabuto entered the training room, where Izanami was using basic ninjutsu on a dummy placed by a jounin. "Katon! Gentle touch of fire!" Suddenly, the dummy bursts into flames as she yells the jutsu's name. "Excellent... we'll soon find out who put that seal on you, Izanami, and then we can start our actual testing." Kabuto smirked at her as she continued practicing. She was a natural at controlling chakra, as her body pulsed with it at each attack.
Kabuto was quite impressed with her incredible progress, that he gave her something. A hair pin, with a moon on it. "Take good care of it.. I don't think that Orochimaru-sama would mind if I gave that to you... it's to celebrate your birthday." She seemed to ignore him, almost glaring to him as he tried to pin it in her hair.
"Don't touch me!" She cried. "I hate you all! I'm only learning this stuff so I can beat you all up when I get stronger!" She held an incredible hatred towards the Sound, especially Kabuto. She stopped glaring at him, as she continues her training, though it stops shortly after, since she's not old enough to carry a lot of chakra. This was the worst day of the time she was kidnapped.
Seven years later.
Suddenly there was a large explosion, as the walls of Otogakure had been breached. The shinobi of Sound searched for the source of the explosion, as they notice that Izanami is missing. "Where is Subject #412?!" Orochimaru panicked, as he yelled out random profanity. Izanami had escaped.
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Post by kain delvin on Dec 12, 2009 11:16:09 GMT -5
//wondering who won this, as it's now dec 12 and red said contest ended on the 8th
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Post by Red on Dec 12, 2009 14:10:18 GMT -5
Im aware. It is over i am however still deciding. There will be a post when i decide. I have given myself a deadline of the 17th to get it done.
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Post by Red on Dec 16, 2009 8:18:45 GMT -5
I have made my decision and it was a hard one for sure... I wont pussyfoot around so ill just say it Kaz won this.
His story was the one that's the most believable and i truly did like it. Though i liked all of them ^^
Kaz talk to me when im on dm and we can create the char.
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Post by Tobi (Hitaku) on Dec 16, 2009 15:04:38 GMT -5
Congratz Kaz
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Post by Tsunade on Dec 16, 2009 15:24:39 GMT -5
Congratz Kaz! And great job everyone who participated! ^_^ <3
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Post by Kaz on Dec 16, 2009 16:30:14 GMT -5
Thanks! I didn't intend to win but I am still happeah!
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