Post by valtorr on Jan 19, 2010 11:54:45 GMT -5
I was bored sooo...ehh give me your opinions please!
The sun was high in the sky , shining brightly over the green land. A few miles away a huge dormant volcano dominated the skyline. A small dirt path ran across the land not leading to a visible town at all. There he walked , silently without any emotion on his face. His clothes, on the surface, appeared to be a simple monk's robe. Below that were the signs of nobility, fine clothing, now hidden due to its tattered state. By the state of the material, it appeared he had been strolling for a while now. In contrast to his clothing his face seemed healthy and well taken care off, his slightly tanned skin showing no bruises, and his hair shone with good care. His ink black eyes would glisten slightly , obviously enjoying the view.
Looking up in the sky he saw something most interesting: the yellow glow of the sun had a much smaller white globe, the moon, hanging in the blue sky nearby He noted the strange phenomenon of the night's orb appearing just as clear as the sun, the small details perfectly revealing themselves to his eyes. Yet it appeared such a miraculous sight was normal to him, as he turned back to the seemingly endless road ahead of him, giving it no more thought.
He suddenly stopped moving, as if frozen to the soil beneath him, while the colour on his face slowly faded. His knees locked not allowing him to move an inch, his weight becoming heavy as his arms slowly started to shake A terrible feeling slowly crawled up his spine right before the world started to spin..faster and faster..The images around him of the beautiful flora had now tranformed into a vague blur. The vertigo of it made him fall to his knees, sweat falling from his now pale face onto the vague image that was once the soil he walked upon. It felt as if invisible wires were pulling harder and harder around his chest making him feel sick. The warm feeling of his body slowly being substituted by a cold harsh feeling. He was suddenly struck in limbo, he could not feel the cold nor the fear that was running up his spine, he could not even think.
A bright light blinded his already blurred vision, and then everything would be back at the start, he'd be standing at the beginning of the path again.
The sun was high in the sky , shining brightly over the green land. A few miles away a huge dormant volcano dominated the skyline. A small dirt path ran across the land not leading to a visible town at all. There he walked , silently without any emotion on his face. His clothes, on the surface, appeared to be a simple monk's robe. Below that were the signs of nobility, fine clothing, now hidden due to its tattered state. By the state of the material, it appeared he had been strolling for a while now. In contrast to his clothing his face seemed healthy and well taken care off, his slightly tanned skin showing no bruises, and his hair shone with good care. His ink black eyes would glisten slightly , obviously enjoying the view.
Looking up in the sky he saw something most interesting: the yellow glow of the sun had a much smaller white globe, the moon, hanging in the blue sky nearby He noted the strange phenomenon of the night's orb appearing just as clear as the sun, the small details perfectly revealing themselves to his eyes. Yet it appeared such a miraculous sight was normal to him, as he turned back to the seemingly endless road ahead of him, giving it no more thought.
He suddenly stopped moving, as if frozen to the soil beneath him, while the colour on his face slowly faded. His knees locked not allowing him to move an inch, his weight becoming heavy as his arms slowly started to shake A terrible feeling slowly crawled up his spine right before the world started to spin..faster and faster..The images around him of the beautiful flora had now tranformed into a vague blur. The vertigo of it made him fall to his knees, sweat falling from his now pale face onto the vague image that was once the soil he walked upon. It felt as if invisible wires were pulling harder and harder around his chest making him feel sick. The warm feeling of his body slowly being substituted by a cold harsh feeling. He was suddenly struck in limbo, he could not feel the cold nor the fear that was running up his spine, he could not even think.
A bright light blinded his already blurred vision, and then everything would be back at the start, he'd be standing at the beginning of the path again.
